a little sense
It’s 100,000 words long, so I’ll post a small chapter to express some emotions and complaints.
During this period, many book friends gave Fenghou opinions, mainly focusing on the characters and plot settings. They were all objective and pertinent. Fenghou would like to express his gratitude here.
Thank you, fellow veterans!
Feng Hou felt it was necessary to explain that Feng Hou had conceived this book for a long time. He planned to write a long novel of about two million words, with a complete outline and a relatively complete outline. So the eunuch may not be big, and the context is going.
It is also relatively stable. (Of course, it will also be fine-tuned based on the opinions of book friends)
The character Gao Yuan has a growth process. From a useless young man, he gradually matures and becomes awesome, so it is impossible to be Long Aotian from the beginning. Many books like to be awesome at the beginning to catch readers. Fenghou understands this very well.
But this does not mean that I agree with this way of writing, because this kind of book is easy to repeat in the later stage, and it is easy to collapse.
When we regard Gao Yuan as ourselves or ordinary people around us, we will find that his actions are purposeful and logical. The protagonist of the novel is a human being, not a born hero. Fenghou's favorite American TV series is "Breaking Bad"
, the biggest advantage of this drama is that everyone has their own motivations and behavioral logic, and the characters are constantly growing and changing, so this drama can start low and go high, and the more it is filmed, the better.
Although Feng Hou’s book is a comedy novel, not a serious drama, no matter how ridiculous it is, it has to be logical. You can’t just have the richest man in the world crawl at Gao Yuan’s feet and call him daddy, or the beauties all over the world become nymphomaniacs when they see Gao Yuan.
Take off your clothes.
Long Aotian, Fenghou’s writing power is limited and he really can’t write!
As for being in the amateur team, the title of the first volume is "The Life of the Amateur Team", but I don't know what's wrong with my operation. The name of the volume is not displayed on the .asxs. Many things here are related to being in the amateur football circle.
What I have experienced is just a little artistic processing, which is actually quite interesting. In the next volume, Gao Yuan will embark on a long career path, and then go to South America and Europe... I won’t spoil it here.
As for the performance of this book, to be honest, Feng Hou was really diligent in writing it, but the performance is really not that good. It can even be said to be a bit miserable.
However, Fenghou discovered a problem, that is, it seems that in general, the results of football competitive novels are not very good (except for the masters, of course, and others are much better than Fenghou). Now the sports competition category is NBA
In this world, people can write tens of thousands of words casually, and the reward for collection and recommendation is N times that of football, it is incomparable.
Fenghou remembers that this was not the case before. About 4 or 5 years ago, Fenghou wrote a book called "The Gene of the King of Football". At that time, asxs competitive novels were still dominated by football, and there were very few basketball players, and the results were also common.
Not so good. But now the situation has completely reversed.
In fact, I really can’t blame others for this. In the final analysis, Chinese football has been poor and weak for too long, which broke the hearts of the fans and drove the majority of sports enthusiasts and young people from the green field to the basketball court. And we,
I can only read between the lines and fantasize about the rise of Chinese football.
As an author who still sticks to football novels, Feng Hou needs your support. Your support is the biggest motivation for my writing.
Chapter completed!